Post by emmett cullen ! on Jun 1, 2009 6:10:42 GMT -5
Pending !
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good luck!
To Improve: You need to add more detail to the following. There just a bit short and theres nothing much too them at the moment. You can go down to the silliest little details in things. Just try to bulk it up a bit more (:
- Appearance
- Personality
- History
Admin Note: Lovely application, just needs bulking up a bit more. Loved your RP sample.
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